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Hey I was just wondering, should I re-continue my multi-chaps from before? They are listed below with pairing and summary. Click on the title to go to the masterpost page for each fic. [Poll #1681026]
Please take a vote and leave any comments if you have any. I kinda feel bad about having so many unfinished multi-chaps, so I'll try to finish one.. 
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This isn't as long as yesterday's, but I hope you enjoy it???
[livejournal.com profile] liquid_drop , this is your chapter, so I'm expecting your comments and if you want anything else idea-wise to be added. You can surely tell me to add stuff. I'll be talking to you more since I have stuff to ask you anyway.


Chapter 15 )
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Okay so like I said before, I'm taking turns with JUMP boys and their OC(s). The first was Chinen's chapter since one of his OCs asked for it, and she commented the most. There's that obvious hint of where I'm taking this to next, and this is because she commented second most, well, besides both Chinen OCs.
Chapter 14 this way )
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Chapter 12, working on the next, before I forget all the ideas i have in mind. Thanks to Aya xD
And sorry, I intend to keep my chapters short.


twelve )


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So here's part 11. I'm surprised I even updated; I guess two of my teachers were nice in letting me have some free time, huh. Sorry about it not being very good; I tried hard, but I guess I'm not good enough for this story >.<



"Do you like Hikaru-kun?" )


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Yep, this is short, demo enjoy ne~


Chapter 10 )
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Chapter 9 )

Okay, so at this point, I need some ideas, I don't know how to continue this; that's why this chapter was so short. Without ideas...the story can't continue, sorry. I really am blank on how to write this now.
When giving me ideas, please put one thing in mind. Here's the layout: Sayuri and Hikaru "gets together," the OCs and their pairs have moments where they get closer, and when they're all happy and content, they help Hikaru try to convince Sayuri to start gymnastics again.
Also for telling me ideas, you can tell me (not limited to) how you want to get together, what sort of things you want to have happen between the two... and just general ideas on how you want the story to go. 
Arigatou, minna~

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Prologue and Chapter 1//Chapter 2 and 3//Chapter 4 and 5//Chapter 6

Chapter 7:

                “Ne, Daijoubu?”

                Hikaru opened his eyes to find the gymnast whose life he had taken away. He shook his head, No, I’m not okay. I’ll never be okay until you start gymnastics again

                “What’s wrong? Where does it hurt?” She kept asking.

                “Kokoro. My heart aches at the thought of killing a gymnast’s career”

                Sayuri looked away.

                “Ne. Why aren’t you doing gymnastics anymore?”


                After awhile, Sayuri whispered, “I-I…..I hate. Gymnastics” Hikaru looked over at her. Sayuri was looking down with tears in her eyes.

                “Uso. Demo, what would make you start liking it?”

                “I’m afraid….” Sayuri broke off. She couldn’t take it anymore.

                “Mou iiyo. Just do whatever you like then!” Hikaru hobbled out of the nurse’s office, leaving Sayuri to cry.


                <That night, in the room>

                “Sayu-chan, gomen ne. About earlier, I just feel guilty you’re not doing gymnastics anymore”

                “Eh? Why would you feel guilty? Moshi kashite, you’re Hikaru-kun from America?”

                There was silence as Hikaru tried to think of what to say.

                “Well, are you? You’re really weird, so I wouldn’t be surprised if you were”

                “Hah? What does me being weird have to do with my gender?
                “Well, let’s see, the fact that you have unbelievable strength for a girl, that Chinen-kun denied you being Yaotome-“

                Hikaru laughed nervously, “Chigee yo! My best friend has the same name as me, okay? We live in America together” Hikaru lied.

                “Whatever, oyasuminasai” Sayuri closed her eyes and soon fell asleep.

                Hikaru sighed. That was close.


                <The next day>

                Although it had been a week, Aya still did not forgive Hikaru about hogging Chinen, no matter how many times Mai explained the reason to her. She sought to revenge whenever possible, but so far her revenge has not been successful, and she’s determined to make it so.

                Today was a good day for revenge. After school, Aya has to clean the classroom with Hikaru-kun.


                Hikaru picked up the broom while Aya held a dirty towel to be washed by the water in the pail by Hikaru’s feet. Because he was not paying attention, Aya took the chance to trip. She screamed as she fell on the ground by tripping over Hikaru’s foot. Then, Hikaru came back to the present. When Aya started to cry and Hikaru extended his arm out to help her up. Aya took the hand, stood up and pushed Hikaru over. Hard.

                “Iteee~” Hikaru winced as the pain shot through his head from the hard fall.

                “Ah, you’ve got a strong personality so you’re okay, right? Un, oh yeah, Chinen-sama asked me to meet him at the park so you clean up the rest, ne. Yoroshiku.” Aya snickered and felt accomplished at her revenge.

                Mai, walking past the classroom, saw Aya leaving happily, so she knew something was wrong. She sprinted past Aya, knocking her shoulder out of the way, making Aya infuriated once more.

                “Watch where you’re going, Mai!” Aya yelled, afraid she’ll tell Chinen that it was she who was bullying Hikaru.

                “Hika-chan, daijoubu?” Mai asked kneeling down next to him. “Who did this to you?” not at all suspecting her best friend.

                “Un, daijoubu” Hikaru forced a smile. Then, everything blacked out.

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Summary: The remake of the original story of Hana Kimi... except gender switch

I will try to put links to every part of the Hana Kimi story..here. This is for easy navigation. Comment if the links are wrong. Hope you like them


Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
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chapter 6


Chapter 6 )
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                “Ah! Sorry I’m late!” Hikaru exclaimed, bowing to the class in apology.

                “Class, this is our transfer student from America, Yaotome Hikaru.” The teacher introduced.

                “UWAA~ She’s so tall!” Matsumura Yuzuki exclaimed. “Sasuga an American!”


Chapter one )
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Sorry chapter 3 is so short (and everything, for that matter, but I guess it's the style of this story)


                As the boys reached the destination, they were stunned. How come no one is here? All of them wondered.


Chapter 3 )



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