FANFIC UPDATE~~
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hikapikashoonYES, Hana Kimi is coming soon, I promise. It's just that I've gotten into this story a lot; it's a lot easier to write for me. Fine, after finishing part 21, I'll go think of the next chapter of Hana Kimi before I start working on Part 22 (can't guarantee more than one for Hana Kimi, sorry >.<)
Okay, so remember the thing about ONE-TIME ONLY - INTO [character]'s THOUGHTS-? Yeah, that's happening with this chapter. This is Sayuko's thoughts.
Part 20
When everybody met again, we headed up to the karaoke room. Kayla and Yabu, holding hands, ran up the stairs and into the room first to steal a few seconds of alone time. I was walking up between Shoon and Hikaru with Taiyou in front. He seemed too lonely, so I ran up to walk with him, which prompted Shoon and Hikaru to walk faster also.
“Ne, Taiyou, race you, ready go!” I sprinted up the stairs with Taiyou tagging behind me, “Hey no fair, you got a head start!”
“That’s cause you’re far too slow” and he picked up the pace.
“Ne, Hikaru, do you still like Sayuko?”
“Un, as a friend” Hikaru smiled reassuringly at the distressed Shoon, as he thought Yes, Shoon. I still love her but I know you’ll have a better chance of being with her, so I gave up and is now devising ways for you to be with her.
“Ne, Sayuko”
“Nani?”
“Do you like Shoon?” I looked at Taiyou, who looked serious.
“Of course, he’s one of my best friends” I laughed at him for asking such a dumb question. However, we both knew I was just stalling on how to answer the real question.
“And we’re best friends too, so you know exactly what I mean”
Silence
Hikaru saw that we were just outside the door so he covered Shoon’s mouth and whispered, “Listen”
“Well, Sayuko? I know that you’d never date someone as close in age with you as Hikaru, or someone younger like me, but what about Shoon? He is almost two years older than you”
“Jitsu wa…”
“You like him, don’t you?”
I looked at the ground and refused to respond. Just then, Kayla came out from inside the room, “Ne are you guys coming in? The time starts now yo~” not realizing the situation
“Un” I smiled and started to walk in the door, glad that Kayla had saved me – or so I thought. Taiyou grabbed my arm, “You haven’t answered me yet”
“Sorry, karaoke is greater than telling you three whether or not I like Shoon”
“I’m one person, Sayuko”
“And behind that wall is the other two I’m talking about” and I walked in. Before the door closerd, Taiyou asked, “How did you know they’re back there?”
I poked my heard back out, “I’m not stupid, you know laughs. Besides, I know they can’t take too long walking up those stairs” and closed the door again.
Hikaru and Shoon came out of hiding and looked at the place where I had disappeared through. Shoon put his hand in his pocket and felt the paper wrapping of the necklace. He sighed.
“Shoon, gomen. I couldn’t get it out of her”
“Daijoubu dayo. Ganbatta kara” and he went into the room, followed by Taiyou and then Hikaru.
*ONE TIME ONLY – INTO SAYUKO’S THOUGHTS*
I can’t believe it. My best friends are idols! Okay, fine. I can believe that, but then why do I feel all giddy around the four people I should feel most comfortable with? Yes, they are boys, good-looking ones too, but I’ve got the good-looking Keith around since I was born! It’s never been a problem! And it’s not cause they take care of me constantly either, Keith does that too. Then why? Is it true? DO I really like Shoon? Taiyou’s right, I’ll never be able to forgive myself if I dated him or Hikaru; it’s like dating Keith and that’s just gross. But Shoon. Shoon’s been there for me since day one, along with Kame. They’ve become like my older brothers, but why do I feel weird and nervous around Shoon but never Kame? I think I like the boy; after all, he’s done more than enough for me. He’s also got that aura with him. The aura, masaka, it’s the aura that’s been doing this to me? But, what about him do I like?...
A/N: Awww, everyone's trying to make them get together; even Hikaru gave up on Sayuko >.< but, why doesn't she get it?!?!??! ROFL, started on the next chapter~
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Date: February 10th, 2010 03:39 am (UTC)sayuko!!! realize that shoon likes yoU!!!!
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Date: February 10th, 2010 03:39 am (UTC)no subject
Date: February 10th, 2010 03:45 am (UTC)no subject
Date: February 10th, 2010 07:22 am (UTC)no subject
Date: February 10th, 2010 07:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: February 10th, 2010 09:06 am (UTC)*Jumps into the story and bumps into hikaru*
"well, HELLO THERE ;)"
*hikaru blinks before running away*
*coughs* carried away again
AHHHH!!! DAMMIT SAYUKO!!! JUST ADMIT IT ALREADY!!! FSFJORIW&$U@(*&@(&(*UEW*OFJSIHWE)PUA*HRF*WRH*W(
iloveyou! for the updates XD
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Date: February 10th, 2010 11:30 pm (UTC)oh god, i'm starting to get all teary-eyed again >.<
and i know you're probably gonna hate me for saying this, but there's actually quite a big gap between how much i like my ichiban shoon and my niban hikaru. shoon is just too lovable to me it seems like he's perfect when he's not, while hikaru is just an awesome kid who never fails to make me have reactions about his actions. however, im sure you can understand that if your ichiban is rumored to be out of JE (whether it's quitting or kicked out) for NO REASON, i'm sure you'd be pretty down too. that's why... i'm not sure when my next update for this fic will be, gomen >.
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Date: February 11th, 2010 10:34 am (UTC)i would often go through periods were the words just refused to come out.
haha, no i dont hate you for liking shoon so much more XD i think everyone is entitled to their own opinion and would like to believe that i am entitled to my own. hika-chan and shoon are just legends! i dont want shoon to leave either :( i entirely understand dont worry :)
i dont know how i would react if hikaru left JE...i would be shocked...but i doubt i would be overly depressed. i think i am a fan of him on the same level as you are (i know, BAD FAN, BAD FAN! YOU SHOULD LOVE YOUR ICHIBAN MORE!!!)
but i will wait for when the words begin to come to you and for the update :)
ganbatte ne~
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Date: February 12th, 2010 10:52 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: February 13th, 2010 01:57 am (UTC)awwe hikaru =')
“And behind that wall is the other two I’m talking about”
ahaha busted x]
But, what about him do I like?...
do u really have to ponder over that =/
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Date: February 13th, 2010 02:34 am (UTC)looks like i have break just in time for olympics too
SHO IS IN VANCOUVER NOW!! TAKE PICTURES FOR ME IF YOU CAN!!!~
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Date: February 13th, 2010 04:18 am (UTC)SHO???REALLY???
why not Nino or OhnoI SHALL GO HUNT HIM DOWN .
wish me luck xD
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Date: February 13th, 2010 10:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: February 14th, 2010 04:20 am (UTC)no subject
Date: February 14th, 2010 11:57 pm (UTC)no taiyou, I LIKE YOU!!!! SUKI DESU!!!!!
“You like him, don’t you?”
me? no! i like yabu, but taiyou, i'm starting to like you as well...>_<
“Shoon, gomen. I couldn’t get it out of her”
taiyou!!! how many times do i have to tell you, YOU'RE THE ONE THAT I LIKE!?!?!?! gawd!
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Date: February 15th, 2010 12:00 am (UTC)no subject
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