Hana Kimi: chapter 9
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hikapikashoonChapter 9:
“Ne, Nami-chan. Is Hikaru…a boy?” Sayuri pulled Nami over after class where no one was there.
“Eh?” Nami leaned forward, afraid that she heard something wrong.
“Is Hikaru your oniichan?” Sayuri repeated.
“Y-Y-You found out?”
“Well, it’s pretty obvious. He keeps using male language”
“Jya, can you keep it a secret for him please? Onegai!”
“Hai, demo, why did he disguise as a girl to come to this school?”
Nami was quiet as she tried to think of a story. “Jitsu wa…”
“Hai?”
“He came here because of you.”
“Because of me?”
Just hiding around the corner, Aya could hear everything as Nami told the story to Sayuri. She decided to find Hikaru.
“Hika-chan!” Aya yelled, waving to signal Hikaru that she wants to talk to him. When Hikaru saw her, he quickly ran away. However, Aya was faster, “Hika-chan!” Aya grabbed Hikaru and when he stopped, she bowed down, “GOMEN! I thought you were gonna steal Chinen from me. I was scared.”
“Hah?”
Hikaru and Aya looked to the source of the voice. It was Mai. “What do you mean steal Chinen from you? I told you deshou? CHINEN LIKES ME MORE!”
“NO HE DOESN’T!”
“YES HE DOES!”
Hikaru sighed and walked away as Mai and Aya continued to argue. However, he stopped when he saw three pairs of feet in front of him.
“Still fighting over me?” Chinen asked, smiling.
“Un” Hikaru nodded.
Hikaru, Chinen, Yuto and Yabu walked side by side inside to their respective dorms.
When Hikaru went into his dorm, Nami came running up to him. “Oniichan, gomen!”
“Hah? Doushita no?”
“GOMEN! I told Sayuri cause she asked me about it.”
“Told her what?”
“That you’re oniichan! Gomen, please don’t tell kaasan, or she’ll make me go back to America”
“Daijoubu, your secret’s safe with me” Hikaru smiled reassuringly at his sister.
Okay, so at this point, I need some ideas, I don't know how to continue this; that's why this chapter was so short. Without ideas...the story can't continue, sorry. I really am blank on how to write this now.
When giving me ideas, please put one thing in mind. Here's the layout: Sayuri and Hikaru "gets together," the OCs and their pairs have moments where they get closer, and when they're all happy and content, they help Hikaru try to convince Sayuri to start gymnastics again.
Also for telling me ideas, you can tell me (not limited to) how you want to get together, what sort of things you want to have happen between the two... and just general ideas on how you want the story to go.
Arigatou, minna~
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Date: February 5th, 2010 05:40 am (UTC)“NO HE DOESN’T!”
“YES HE DOES!”
must we fight every time someone mentions chinen =/
“That you’re oniichan! Gomen, please don’t tell kaasan, or she’ll make me go back to America”,
oohhh
so sayuri's gonna talk to hikaru?
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Date: February 5th, 2010 06:05 am (UTC)no subject
Date: February 5th, 2010 06:16 am (UTC)and what do you mean Sayuri's gonna talk to Hikaru?
IDEAS, CHINEN?! DOKO?!
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Date: February 6th, 2010 01:02 am (UTC)that...have to think about that first =/
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Date: February 6th, 2010 01:21 am (UTC)IDEAS O:
Date: February 5th, 2010 05:57 am (UTC)Orca scoop festival, and the dorms having maid cafes or haunted houses Except instead of maids, the girls should be butlers. xD
Ooorrrrrd a soccor game! YEAH!
OOOOH! A SCAVENGER HUNTTTT! Pair every guy with their OC and BAM! Closerness takes place.
Sorry, I watched the drama earlier, so I'm really hyper.
GREAT CHAPTER BY THE WAY. :D
Re: IDEAS O:
Date: February 5th, 2010 05:58 am (UTC)I meant "or a school festival" xD
Re: IDEAS O:
Date: February 5th, 2010 06:20 am (UTC)thanks for all the great ideas xDDDDDDD
i dont want to do the whole announcing thing again, maybe there's a better way to announce the hunt?
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Date: February 5th, 2010 06:33 am (UTC)Re: IDEAS O:
Date: February 5th, 2010 06:35 am (UTC)Not shit aroows. SHOT.
that would majorly hurt if you shit arrows though. xD
Re: IDEAS O:
Date: February 5th, 2010 10:59 pm (UTC)thanks~
and haha, i read your correction. "shOt" lol
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Date: February 5th, 2010 06:01 am (UTC)no subject
Date: February 5th, 2010 10:21 am (UTC)me ish sneaky huh? hahaha!!!
“Hika-chan!” Aya yelled, waving to signal Hikaru that she wants to talk to him. When Hikaru saw her, he quickly ran away. However, Aya was faster
O_o i scared the hell outta him!!!!
“GOMEN! I thought you were gonna steal Chinen from me. I was scared.”
ooooh, i only call chii chinen now, instead of chinen-sama...^_^V improving....^_^V
“Still fighting over me?” Chinen asked, smiling.
YES CHII!!! AND WE'RE READY TO KILL EACH OTHER FOR YOU!!!!!
yosh!! it's weekend so i might finish reading you first fic, depending on what will i do...>_< i've got a long "things to do" here, LOLS!
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Date: February 5th, 2010 11:06 pm (UTC)and yeah, because you were so mean to him, he suspects you'll be like that again, BUT YOU DIDNT!!! xDDD
and haha, i forgot, but maybe cause you're not with Mai or something and you didn't want him to know you're calling him sama???
*stops the fight between you and chinen [mai]*
well, be waiting for your comments xD
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Date: February 5th, 2010 10:21 am (UTC)no subject
Date: February 5th, 2010 11:38 am (UTC)Idea: Futsal competition! Something like Hikaru on anyone 's team and then he kicked too hard (being A BOY XD) and another someone got hurt.
gets stuck for a moment..The prize is the winning team gets to spend a night with any of the guests (which are the JUMP boys ne?) And of course there are some losing ones......... Which I hope you got an idea after reading this and you write it! XDGAH, HEADACHE! Sorry~ I don't know how to give ideas na... Just tried to help >.< *bows apologetically*
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Date: February 5th, 2010 01:43 pm (UTC)i dont have any ideas but i think it was a pretty good chapter. hikaru is founded out by sayuri XDD
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Date: February 5th, 2010 02:29 pm (UTC)