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hikapikashoon) wrote2010-02-04 09:29 pm
Hana Kimi: chapter 9
Chapter 9:
“Ne, Nami-chan. Is Hikaru…a boy?” Sayuri pulled Nami over after class where no one was there.
“Eh?” Nami leaned forward, afraid that she heard something wrong.
“Is Hikaru your oniichan?” Sayuri repeated.
“Y-Y-You found out?”
“Well, it’s pretty obvious. He keeps using male language”
“Jya, can you keep it a secret for him please? Onegai!”
“Hai, demo, why did he disguise as a girl to come to this school?”
Nami was quiet as she tried to think of a story. “Jitsu wa…”
“Hai?”
“He came here because of you.”
“Because of me?”
Just hiding around the corner, Aya could hear everything as Nami told the story to Sayuri. She decided to find Hikaru.
“Hika-chan!” Aya yelled, waving to signal Hikaru that she wants to talk to him. When Hikaru saw her, he quickly ran away. However, Aya was faster, “Hika-chan!” Aya grabbed Hikaru and when he stopped, she bowed down, “GOMEN! I thought you were gonna steal Chinen from me. I was scared.”
“Hah?”
Hikaru and Aya looked to the source of the voice. It was Mai. “What do you mean steal Chinen from you? I told you deshou? CHINEN LIKES ME MORE!”
“NO HE DOESN’T!”
“YES HE DOES!”
Hikaru sighed and walked away as Mai and Aya continued to argue. However, he stopped when he saw three pairs of feet in front of him.
“Still fighting over me?” Chinen asked, smiling.
“Un” Hikaru nodded.
Hikaru, Chinen, Yuto and Yabu walked side by side inside to their respective dorms.
When Hikaru went into his dorm, Nami came running up to him. “Oniichan, gomen!”
“Hah? Doushita no?”
“GOMEN! I told Sayuri cause she asked me about it.”
“Told her what?”
“That you’re oniichan! Gomen, please don’t tell kaasan, or she’ll make me go back to America”
“Daijoubu, your secret’s safe with me” Hikaru smiled reassuringly at his sister.
Okay, so at this point, I need some ideas, I don't know how to continue this; that's why this chapter was so short. Without ideas...the story can't continue, sorry. I really am blank on how to write this now.
When giving me ideas, please put one thing in mind. Here's the layout: Sayuri and Hikaru "gets together," the OCs and their pairs have moments where they get closer, and when they're all happy and content, they help Hikaru try to convince Sayuri to start gymnastics again.
Also for telling me ideas, you can tell me (not limited to) how you want to get together, what sort of things you want to have happen between the two... and just general ideas on how you want the story to go.
Arigatou, minna~
IDEAS O:
Orca scoop festival, and the dorms having maid cafes or haunted houses Except instead of maids, the girls should be butlers. xD
Ooorrrrrd a soccor game! YEAH!
OOOOH! A SCAVENGER HUNTTTT! Pair every guy with their OC and BAM! Closerness takes place.
Sorry, I watched the drama earlier, so I'm really hyper.
GREAT CHAPTER BY THE WAY. :D
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I meant "or a school festival" xD
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thanks for all the great ideas xDDDDDDD
i dont want to do the whole announcing thing again, maybe there's a better way to announce the hunt?
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Not shit aroows. SHOT.
that would majorly hurt if you shit arrows though. xD
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thanks~
and haha, i read your correction. "shOt" lol